Should Homework to be dismissed? (exposition text)

well, so this is just the one of examples of  exposition text :

Ok, so right now, im gonna talk about student’s problem which is so hard to be solved I think. Yap, homework, such a word which students always hear every single day but most of them hate this word.  In our beloved country, Indonesia, most of students get a sea of homeworks so they get tired of those works.

The students think homework is a thing that really disturb them, because they are gonna loss their spare time. Ok, so just for your information, one of school in Germany named Elsa-Brandstrom School that’s located in North Rhine-Westphalia do not allow the teachers to give students homework. The headmaster does it in order to make students do not feel bored and do not disturb students’ leisure times.

That’s not false statement, but that’s not also true yet.  If we think clearly, if we imagine far, homework is kinda important enough in order to practice students, so the students do not only can have their leisure times by playing or anything else but they can fill their spare time by studying.  Even, the result of observation,  “homework” can increase student’s achievement

Well, actually, students get tired, get confused of homeworks, because they have over loaded of homeworks. Their brain always have to works every single time. Honestly I don’t think that homework should be dismissed yet I don’t want students always get homework everyday.  So I think homework shouldn’t be dismissed yet should be reduced.